Sunday, April 5, 2009

Listening

Bodies entwined

Hearts beating

Breathing, fast

Hands caressing skin, hair

Our bodies listening


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16 comments:

  1. spacedlawApril 5, 2009 at 5:57 PM

    An excellent way of listening too.

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  2. anthonynorthApril 5, 2009 at 6:13 PM

    A great description of what goes on.

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  3. Gemma WisemanApril 5, 2009 at 6:43 PM

    There are moments when the body is highly tuned to sounds beyond sound.

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  4. LaurielucApril 5, 2009 at 6:58 PM

    a perfect moment.

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  5. JeevesApril 6, 2009 at 12:34 AM

    Sensuous :)

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  6. Bruce MillerApril 6, 2009 at 12:40 AM

    Exactly ! - how can science believe that the eardrum's tiny flap of skin can hear all that can be heard?

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  7. gautami tripathyApril 6, 2009 at 1:47 AM

    Sensually visual...

    scotch-taped

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  8. RavenApril 6, 2009 at 6:52 AM

    Lovely and tenderly sensuous.

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  9. zoya gautamApril 6, 2009 at 8:45 AM

    ..drums and pianos and violins_ask those who play them-wonderful..many thanks..

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  10. SandyCarlsonApril 6, 2009 at 10:08 AM

    There is a beautiful magic to that kind of listening.

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  11. MaggieApril 6, 2009 at 10:09 AM

    I loved the sounds of the bodies seen in your poem.

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  12. floretaApril 6, 2009 at 11:34 AM

    yum!! man do i miss this..

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  13. Tumblewords:April 6, 2009 at 2:37 PM

    Beautifully done! It speaks strongly and sweetly.

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  14. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)April 6, 2009 at 4:32 PM

    ...and most likely having a lot of fun too! Hummmmm .. it is sensuous.

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  15. Independent ChickApril 7, 2009 at 1:10 AM

    Very sensuous. And FUN! ; ) So much can be said when nothing is being said at all.

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  16. CarrieApril 7, 2009 at 10:16 PM

    Thank you to all of you who have commented on my poem. I am not a poet nor a writer and sometimes feel a fraud when I participate in OSI especially when I read what all you have contributed. You guys are awesome and I don't feel I have the words to even comment on what you all contribute. All I can say is thankyou and I am in awe of everyone of you. XOXO

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